Tuesday 29 January 2013

COLD AND ALONE..

Cold and alone Lonely sat
and pondered long and hard
Who to send her present to
and should she add a card

She'd seen the village children play
and laughted along with them
Maybe they could come some day
and bring their ted's, all ten?

A cold icy finger shivered down her back
and as she wrote her card
Toby's name sprang to her mind
she no longer found it hard

So she sent to him a walnut whip
she was totally unaware
That he'd been chased around the house
and almost everywhere

the Ice queen in her bower did smile
her plan, her idea , her trap
for she'd been the one to drop his name
into Lonelys lap

Now Toby still lived in fear
of walnut whip attack!
So Lonely's gift a thought so dear
could seriously set him back

But fate did choose to intervene
and send into the battle
Arabella a sasha old and wise
and full of steel and mettle

So the Ice Queens plan did fail
and Lonely gains some friends
Who plan to save this little soul
and try to make amends

8 comments:

  1. I still hold Lonely's fate in my hands!!!!! Thank you so much for ANOTHER poem...can't you say something nice about me next time????? :)

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    1. I can only say something nice when......LONELY GETS HER BEAR BACK... :)

      Ice Ice Queeny.... lol

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    2. 'I still hold Lonely's fate in my hands!!!'

      ....and unfortunately don't we all know it!
      Such sad and powerless times for Lonely and US.

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  2. My word what a fantastic poem.
    I cannot believe that the Ice Queen's heart hasn't melted. She keeps saying she's not as bad as all that but ..... WHERE'S THE PROOF?

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  3. Well Dee! I can hardly keep up with you and your blog posts. No sooner have I written a comment to your latest post and gone away from the laptop than you're obviously AT IT again.
    No wonder nothing much is getting done here! Even MY own blog comments today remain unanswered as yet and
    if this continues you're going to make me break my New Year's resolution of trying to answer all of them ...and I was trying SO very hard to keep that up!

    I'm very envious of your abilty to write in rhyme, something I have never been able to do and doubt that I will ever be able to do so in the future.

    I'm lapping up every written word about Little Lonely even though it is deeply upsetting me.

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    1. Sorry :) this rhyme came to me after writing the post so decided to put it on while fresh!

      I'm sure Fritz and Terrorist will save the day although I am sure they will have much to deal with to achieve the rescue of ted, I hope they are dressed warmly against the cold in T.H.A.T house :)

      Battle continues.......

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